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All Deviations
All Deviations

An inspiration? by ~jaqx:iconjaqx:



The things I think
The feelings I feel
The words I speak
Choose to speak
This life I choose
What I choose today
Yesterday
What will become of them?
Made of them
Is it meaningless?
For will there truly be a difference
A change in my path?
The path
The one way to lead life
Will these choices break me away
A new path forms?
But is it really different
Is there a change?
Perhaps I have jumped
Instead of walked
A new perspective
Gained if only for an instant

Begot out of love?
A choice I didn’t make
But must live with
Maybe that is life
For I am here now, aren’t I?

The dreams I dream
The hope I have
Can have
Do they affect me?

The decisions I make
We make
The way I can be
Will be
What will become of me?
Imagine
©2007-2008 ~jaqx
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First poem I've written since my schooling days...
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=TheeForsakenOne:iconTheeForsakenOne: May 7, 2007, 1:11:48 PM
That was pretty good. I'm sorry I can't say much more but I'm not very good at commenting on poetry.

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